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David Fisher's avatar

Fantastic opening. Intrigue, suspense, and some backstory without an info dump. Keep at it, Salavdor can't be left to the dark.

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Brenna Cuba's avatar

:)

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Laura Efron's avatar

Oh wow, definitely drawn in, Brenna! Yes, go write it!

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Brenna Cuba's avatar

Oh, it's happening.

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Kara's avatar

Yes yes yes!!! I love it

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Brenna Cuba's avatar

Thank you!

BRB... gonna go write the rest of the book now.

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Kara's avatar

I’m holding you to that 👀

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Brenna Cuba's avatar

LOL. Finally! Some accountability.

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